Follow
Take 6: gold
From my first photo workshop with @paddy.lu, I'll post a series of photos of @charlottekrukenberg I'd like to get feedback on. Second photo always is „out of camera“. You can also remix my photos on Lightroom, go to http://mik.fm/lr (currently only on Desktop, soon on mobile)
@toby I think the edited picture is a bit too grainy. And the colors are off. I like the framing and the look of the model very much.
@toby
the hand in the foreground looks disturbingly large for me
@toby the framing is definitely better on the edit, although I still think she might be too far to the left of frame given that’s the direction of her stance. That point though might be contentious.